Could a teacher correct complex questions?

Could a teacher correct complex questions?

1 Do you believe the facet that he shows people. He's not as nice as he makes out to be.
2 The subway is easy to understand. We have to stop at the station where the 2 lines intersect and take the red line.
3 I wish just one day that no part of my body would hurt. One day I have a head ache the next I have a stomach ache the next my foot hurts.
4 I know had I come to visit the city in the winter I wouldn't have appreciated it the same way.
5 I'd rather freeze my face off than freeze my neck off because if I wear my scarf over my face and not my neck, there is a better chance I will get sick.
6 Let's go inside to warm up a bit. I'm feel cold out in the snow.
7 When you have self serve fountains, people get water cups free then fill up on Pepsi. Refills are expensive to the company.
8 The only city I'd not be miserable about living in other than Chicago is Denver.
9 Do you have to give a person's deposit back if you can't carry out your job due to natural disasters?
10 We won't take out kids on vacation with us until they are old enough to enjoy themselves and remember the cities they've visited.
11 Would you rather be so cold as not to feel your face or so hot as not to be able to breathe? Would you rather live a cold country or warm country?
12The tram in this city doesn't have its own lane. It follows the lane of the cars.
13 I pay the monthly salary of one employee with the money from renting a hotel room for one night

Thank you in advance.