Could a native please correct these sentences?

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Could you please help me make these grammatical?

1 I can tell from the way her hair is if she's ...

2 Hold your arm out straight when holding the wheel.

3 This computer is fine as a secondary computer not a primary one.

4 They put in a lot of spices to cover up the expired meat.

5 All the stores are so closed together. It's a small town.

6 How could a mother set an example by doing bad things.

Thank you

Free_spirit · Accepted Answer

1 I can tell from the way her hair is if she's ... [ok]

2 Hold your arm out straight when holding the wheel. [ok - but arm or arms?]

3 This computer is fine as a secondary computer, not a primary one. [ok, but add comma before "not"]

4 They put in a lot of spices to cover up the expired meat. ["expired meat" doesn't sound right... you can maybe say "old meat" or "rotting meat" - depending how bad it smells/tastes]

5 All the stores are so close together. It's a small town.

6 How could a mother set an example by doing bad things?

Could a native please correct these sentences?

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