Coud you correct mistakes if any?

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Thanks to the Internet, a college student in New York and an elderly woman in Paris can meet each other online and talk about various topics.

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

I don't see any mistakes in the sentence.

Anonymous · Answer

No apparent grammatical error. Meet - is no quite the choice word in this context in my opinion. Perhaps word choice and style could be improved. i.e. Thanks to the advance of communication technology, a student in New York can chat with an elderly woman in Paris using free video-chat applications.

TeacherJapan · Answer

Thank you very much:)

Clive · Answer

I find the original sentence has more charm.

Clive

TeacherJapan · Answer

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