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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Cosmetic

And yes, strangers and random ppl in public, generally can tell that I've had work done, and that's why I want to get a revision. This way I keep this aspect of my life private, and I have control of who knows about it.

Please proofread. Thank you!
  

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Hi, Starting with 'And yes' is OK in casual English. Write 'people', not 'ppl'. No comma after 'public'.

— Clive

  • Hi, Starting with 'And yes' is OK in casual English.
  • Write 'people', not 'ppl'.
  • No comma after 'public'.
  • A 'revision' does not sound quite right for cosmetic surgery.
  • Find another word.
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Hi,

Starting with 'And yes' is OK in casual English.

Write 'people', not 'ppl'.

No comma after 'public'.

A 'revision' does not sound quite right for cosmetic surgery. Find another word. How a
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CliveHi,Starting with 'And yes' is OK in casual English.Write 'people', not 'ppl'.No comma after 'public'.A 'revision' does not sound quite right for cosmetic surgery. Find another word. How about 'a makeover'?Clive
Yes, strangers and random people in public generally can tell that I've had work done, and that's why I want to get a makeover. This way I keep th
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Hi,

Yes.

Do you need to say 'in public'?

What's the difference between a stranger and a random person?

I prefer 'control over' to 'control of'.

C
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CliveHi,Yes. Do you need to say 'in public'?What's the difference between a stranger and a random person?I prefer 'control over' to 'control of'.Clive
No, I don't have to say in public.

There's no difference, I should pick one.

Do control over and control of mean the same thing?
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Hi,

Much depends on the context.
But, to my mind, 'control over' suggests a more general and complete kind of control.

Clive
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