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Xxcrazxx Posted 20 years ago
corruption
You've tainted my memories
and corrupted my soul.
Pushed every last botton
now I'm out of control.
Love; Its a vicious cycle
always causeing pain.
So confussing and deciving
and it's driving me insane.
One minute you love me
the next you don't.
I've relized love is a game
a riddle with no answer; a joke.
But I can't help but love you
hold you close to my heart.
So now I stand back and watch
as it all false apart
and corrupted my soul.
Pushed every last botton
now I'm out of control.
Love; Its a vicious cycle
always causeing pain.
So confussing and deciving
and it's driving me insane.
One minute you love me
the next you don't.
I've relized love is a game
a riddle with no answer; a joke.
But I can't help but love you
hold you close to my heart.
So now I stand back and watch
as it all false apart
Top answer
Your meter is off, and you have several misspellings. You had better sit down with a dictionary and check couplets 2-5.
- Your meter is off, and you have several misspellings.
- You had better sit down with a dictionary and check couplets 2-5.
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Your meter is off, and you have several misspellings. You had better sit down with a dictionary and check couplets 2-5.
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