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Hrsanei Posted 15 years ago
Vocabulary

Correlation

Is correlation the right word in the following context?

if not what I can replace it with?

By saying correlation I mean sth like relation, cooperation and these things



I cherish the opportunity to have correlation with industry and participate in industrial projects.



thanks for your time









  

Top answer

Wrong word choice, wrong phrase choice. Is this for a resume or cover letter? 'Cherish' is too cute a word; it is not businesslike.

— Mister Micawber

  • Wrong word choice, wrong phrase choice.
  • Is this for a resume or cover letter?
  • 'Cherish' is too cute a word; it is not businesslike.
  • Perhaps: I am excited about the opportunity to become involved in industry and participate in industrial projects.
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Wrong word choice, wrong phrase choice. Is this for a resume or cover letter? 'Cherish' is too cute a word; it is not businesslike. Perhaps:

I am excited about the opportunity to become involved in industry and participate in industrial projects.
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Thanks Mister Micawber.

as you said, it is part of a cover letter.
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