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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Business & Finance
correcton of motivaton letter
Can you guys help me with this one, it is very important to me and my family to get this job. Thanks
Dear Mme. …….
I am writing to you in response to the announcement of coordinator for the fashion department of ……School of art.
Working as a professor and as co-coordinator since January 2008 in a pleasing environment like …school’s name…, it has been a gratifying and thriving experience. I am looking forward to continue being part of this constructive diversity and hopefully to carry on my collaboration towards the expansion of the school. I see the future …school’s name…, as the pilot institution and a potential reference for European and international schools.
Working as a designer and specially with …company’ name…, a French Haute Couture house, I did not only participate on creating luxury goods but as well on communicating a luxury company through my participation on planning and organizing fashion shows in Paris and abroad (Russia, Japan, Italy, etc). I would like to propose a more professional presentation of the final year fashion show to better convey and communicate the level of the school. Nevertheless, I would also like to research alternative ways to present students work: gallery exhibitions, competitions, and participation to professional fairs…
Holding a master degree at the …school’s name… in Paris, one of the most prestigious schools of fashion management and design, as well as my 7-year professional experience in the Haute Couture and RTW, I have created a solid network with the luxury companies. These valuable professional contacts are an asset to develop relations between the school and the industry, for instance to invite lectures, get internships to students, communicate and sponsoring...
As a former student at …school name…, I have a unique profile that helps me to understand, to guide and to advice most students at …school’s name…. Moreover, I have already noticed that they trust and relay on my experience and use it as a reference and assurance to overcome any social and professional worries.
I truly believe that in the present world of globalization, the design’s future is in the hands of creative people formed with a global vision of multi-disciplinary tasks. Therefore as a future coordinator I will take advantage of the unique infrastructure of …school’s name… to promote projects (…exemples…) that will further involve the participation of the different departments and benefit the school in general.
As creative citizens of this world and in response to our environmental and social responsibilities, I’m convinced in the utility of awaking the student’s conscience on ethical design. Then I would take the opportunity of this position to express and transmit part of my personal projects in a new pedagogic program:
Ethical design is an alternative road for creativity, a real responsible contribution to progress and economy. We could propose a theme of a future research and organize seminars on this theme as a starting point.
My resume and samples of my work are enclosed for your evaluation. Please do not hesitate to contact me by phone at ###### or by e-mail: Email Removed.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely
Dear Mme. …….
I am writing to you in response to the announcement of coordinator for the fashion department of ……School of art.
Working as a professor and as co-coordinator since January 2008 in a pleasing environment like …school’s name…, it has been a gratifying and thriving experience. I am looking forward to continue being part of this constructive diversity and hopefully to carry on my collaboration towards the expansion of the school. I see the future …school’s name…, as the pilot institution and a potential reference for European and international schools.
Working as a designer and specially with …company’ name…, a French Haute Couture house, I did not only participate on creating luxury goods but as well on communicating a luxury company through my participation on planning and organizing fashion shows in Paris and abroad (Russia, Japan, Italy, etc). I would like to propose a more professional presentation of the final year fashion show to better convey and communicate the level of the school. Nevertheless, I would also like to research alternative ways to present students work: gallery exhibitions, competitions, and participation to professional fairs…
Holding a master degree at the …school’s name… in Paris, one of the most prestigious schools of fashion management and design, as well as my 7-year professional experience in the Haute Couture and RTW, I have created a solid network with the luxury companies. These valuable professional contacts are an asset to develop relations between the school and the industry, for instance to invite lectures, get internships to students, communicate and sponsoring...
As a former student at …school name…, I have a unique profile that helps me to understand, to guide and to advice most students at …school’s name…. Moreover, I have already noticed that they trust and relay on my experience and use it as a reference and assurance to overcome any social and professional worries.
I truly believe that in the present world of globalization, the design’s future is in the hands of creative people formed with a global vision of multi-disciplinary tasks. Therefore as a future coordinator I will take advantage of the unique infrastructure of …school’s name… to promote projects (…exemples…) that will further involve the participation of the different departments and benefit the school in general.
As creative citizens of this world and in response to our environmental and social responsibilities, I’m convinced in the utility of awaking the student’s conscience on ethical design. Then I would take the opportunity of this position to express and transmit part of my personal projects in a new pedagogic program:
Ethical design is an alternative road for creativity, a real responsible contribution to progress and economy. We could propose a theme of a future research and organize seminars on this theme as a starting point.
My resume and samples of my work are enclosed for your evaluation. Please do not hesitate to contact me by phone at ###### or by e-mail: Email Removed.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely
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I'll review the first few lines for you. Dear Mme. : I am responding to the job posting for a coordinator of the fashion department in ……School of Art.
- I'll review the first few lines for you.
- Dear Mme.
- : I am responding to the job posting for a coordinator of the fashion department in ……School of Art.
- Since January 2008 I have worked as a professor and as co-coordinator at …school’s name…, a gratifying experience and an environment in which I've thrived.
- I want to continue being part of this creative, diverse team and would like to help expand the school.
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I'll review the first few lines for you.
Dear Mme. …….:
I am responding to the job posting for a coordinator of the fashion department in ……School of Art. Since January 2008 I have worked as a professor and as co-coordinator at …school’s name…, a gratifying experience and an environment in which I've thrived. I want to continue being part of this creative, diverse team and woul
Dear Mme. …….:
I am responding to the job posting for a coordinator of the fashion department in ……School of Art. Since January 2008 I have worked as a professor and as co-coordinator at …school’s name…, a gratifying experience and an environment in which I've thrived. I want to continue being part of this creative, diverse team and woul
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