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Hans51 Posted 11 years ago
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If you do not burn the garbage in a proper way or burn it legally, poisonous materials, such as hydrogen chloride, sulfur oxides, aldehyde, ammonia, organic acid, etc are released and then they cause air pollution and air pollution- related diseases.


Does this sentence make sense and are the choices of words correct to native English speakers?


Thank you so much as usual in advance!

  

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Hans51 Does this sentence make sense and are the choices of words correct to native English speakers? It makes sense, but it can be improved a little: If you do not burn garbage properly, poisonous materials such as hydrogen chloride, sulfur oxides, aldehydes, ammonia, and organic acids are released and cause air pollution and the diseases it brings. It is probably not necessary to mention so many poisonous materials.

— CalifJim

  • Hans51 Does this sentence make sense and are the choices of words correct to native English speakers?
  • It makes sense, but it can be improved a little: If you do not burn garbage properly, poisonous materials such as hydrogen chloride, sulfur oxides, aldehydes, ammonia, and organic acids are released and cause air pollution and the diseases it brings.
  • It is probably not necessary to mention so many poisonous materials.
  • Also, the legality of the garbage disposal is not relevant to your point.
  • CJ
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Hans51Does this sentence make sense and are the choices of words correct to native English speakers?
It makes sense, but it can be improved a little:

If you do not burn garbage properly, poisonous materials such as hydrogen chloride, sulfur oxides, aldehydes, ammonia, and organic acids are released and cause air pollution and the diseases it brings
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