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Jason Roberts Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Corrections please? (Facebook Album Description)

"The place were actually slightly dark with disco lights but became bright due to the flash of the camera used."

I'm not sure if it should really "The place" if using it as a description of the photo album in facebook.

Is "with disco lights on" better?

"to the flash" or "to flash"?

By the way, belated Merry Christmas to all of you! =))
  

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The place was actually rather dark with only the disco lights, but it brightened when the camera flashed.

  • The place was actually rather dark with only the disco lights, but it brightened when the camera flashed.
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The place was actually rather dark with only the disco lights, but it brightened when the camera flashed.

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