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Saltukhan Posted 17 years ago
Business & Finance
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1-) I need your help. Please read the letter below and give advices and comments about it. i wanna tell those words in a better way.
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Dear Sir,
I am the export-import responsible of xxx company.
Thank you for visiting our area in the fair last week. It would be pleasure for us to work with you.
We are the largest panel pvc-2 producer in the world. We have been producing various kinds of interior doors. From one door for flat or 10,000 doors for big residential projects, all types of door requirements are fulfilled either installed or not installed.
Here are some documents attached presenting our products .
Best Regards
2)Is this form true? Or are there any similiar telling style or telling way of this in a better way?
I am the new export-import responsible of xxx company. I have started to work in this position instead of Ms. Brown.
Thank u for your time
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Dear Sir,
I am the export-import responsible of xxx company.
Thank you for visiting our area in the fair last week. It would be pleasure for us to work with you.
We are the largest panel pvc-2 producer in the world. We have been producing various kinds of interior doors. From one door for flat or 10,000 doors for big residential projects, all types of door requirements are fulfilled either installed or not installed.
Here are some documents attached presenting our products .
Best Regards
2)Is this form true? Or are there any similiar telling style or telling way of this in a better way?
I am the new export-import responsible of xxx company. I have started to work in this position instead of Ms. Brown.
Thank u for your time
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Dear Mr [surname], I am the export-import [manager/officer/clerk/representative] for *** Company . Thank you for visiting our area at the [Fair Name] fair last week. It would be a pleasure for us to be able to work with you.
- Dear Mr [surname], I am the export-import [manager/officer/clerk/representative] for *** Company .
- Thank you for visiting our area at the [Fair Name] fair last week.
- It would be a pleasure for us to be able to work with you.
- We are the largest PVC-2 panel producer in the world.
- We produce all types of interior doors, from a single door for a single flat to 10,000 doors for large residential projects, including installation if required.
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Dear Mr [surname],
I am the export-import [manager/officer/clerk/representative] for *** Company.
Thank you for visiting our area at the [Fair Name] fair last week. It would be a pleasure for us to be able to work with you.
We are the largest PVC-2 panel producer in the world. We produce all types
I am the export-import [manager/officer/clerk/representative] for *** Company.
Thank you for visiting our area at the [Fair Name] fair last week. It would be a pleasure for us to be able to work with you.
We are the largest PVC-2 panel producer in the world. We produce all types
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