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Mk_nepal Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing
Corrections Please!
I would be grateful if you could correct my English below. Thanks
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Dear Arbinda
Spoke with Ramesh and agreed to procure following IT items.
Items Model Make Qty Price (Approx)
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1. UPS
2. CPU
3. Wireless handset (will trail first if it works, then buy)
4. Mobile
Others IT equipment which I mentioned in my previous email will be delivered under future rollout.
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Dear Arbinda
Spoke with Ramesh and agreed to procure following IT items.
Items Model Make Qty Price (Approx)
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
1. UPS
2. CPU
3. Wireless handset (will trail first if it works, then buy)
4. Mobile
Others IT equipment which I mentioned in my previous email will be delivered under future rollout.
Top answer
Mk_nepal Dear Arbinda Spoke with Ramesh and agreed to procure following IT items. ) -------------------- 1. UPS (I have no idea what a "UPS" is.
- Mk_nepal Dear Arbinda Spoke with Ramesh and agreed to procure following IT items.
- ) -------------------- 1.
- UPS (I have no idea what a "UPS" is.
- ) 2.
- ) 3.
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Mk_nepal Dear Arbinda
Spoke with Ramesh and agreed to procure following IT items. (colon)
Items Model Make Qty Price (Approx)(Why do you set up this format and not use it?)
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1. UPS (I have no idea what a "UPS" is. United Parcel Service??)
2. CPU (Hard to believe
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