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Mk_nepal Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

Corrections Please!

I would be grateful if you could correct my English below. Thanks

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Dear Arbinda

Spoke with Ramesh and agreed to procure following IT items.

Items Model Make Qty Price (Approx)
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1. UPS
2. CPU
3. Wireless handset (will trail first if it works, then buy)
4. Mobile

Others IT equipment which I mentioned in my previous email will be delivered under future rollout.
  

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Mk_nepal Dear Arbinda Spoke with Ramesh and agreed to procure following IT items. ) -------------------- 1. UPS (I have no idea what a "UPS" is.

  • Mk_nepal Dear Arbinda Spoke with Ramesh and agreed to procure following IT items.
  • ) -------------------- 1.
  • UPS (I have no idea what a "UPS" is.
  • ) 2.
  • ) 3.
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Mk_nepal Dear Arbinda
Spoke with Ramesh and agreed to procure following IT items. (colon)

Items Model Make Qty Price (Approx)(Why do you set up this format and not use it?)
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1. UPS (I have no idea what a "UPS" is. United Parcel Service??)
2. CPU (Hard to believe

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