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Saltukhan Posted 19 years ago
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Corrections please
Hey Native speaker
i need your help again.
i wrote my cover letter and now i need corrections.
please have a glance on it.
Dear Ms. S,
I am writing in reference to your website (www.WWW.co.uk) which is for internship program in your website. I will be graduating in September 2007 with a bachelor of Science degree in Industrial Engineering and i believe my qualifications would be consistent with those desired by your firm.
Throughout my collegiate career, I have stayed well-rounded by combining my academics with leadership and work experience. By majoring in Industrial Engineering, I have been exposed to all facets of industrial engineering from operations research to quality control.
From my childhood to university years, to be a part of WWW have being my dream. I believe i will be useful to obtain your company aims. Thus this expreince will be so good for my career too.
King Regards
Saltukhan X
i need your help again.
i wrote my cover letter and now i need corrections.
please have a glance on it.
Dear Ms. S,
I am writing in reference to your website (www.WWW.co.uk) which is for internship program in your website. I will be graduating in September 2007 with a bachelor of Science degree in Industrial Engineering and i believe my qualifications would be consistent with those desired by your firm.
Throughout my collegiate career, I have stayed well-rounded by combining my academics with leadership and work experience. By majoring in Industrial Engineering, I have been exposed to all facets of industrial engineering from operations research to quality control.
From my childhood to university years, to be a part of WWW have being my dream. I believe i will be useful to obtain your company aims. Thus this expreince will be so good for my career too.
King Regards
Saltukhan X
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Saltukhan Hey Native speaker i need your help again. i wrote my cover letter and now i need corrections. please have a glance on it.
- Saltukhan Hey Native speaker i need your help again.
- i wrote my cover letter and now i need corrections.
- please have a glance on it.
- Dear Ms.
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SaltukhanHey Native speaker
i need your help again.
i wrote my cover letter and now i need corrections.
please have a glance on it.
Dear Ms. S,
I am writing in reference to your website (www.WWW.co.uk)which is forabout an internship program in your
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SaltukhanHey[Hello,] Native speaker
I need your help again.
I wrote my cover letter and now I need corrections.
Please have a glance at it.
Dear Ms. S,
I
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Thank you very much Philip.
I am considering your corrections.
Its nice to see you again in same forum.
Long time no see
I am considering your corrections.
Its nice to see you again in same forum.
Long time no see
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Feebs11SaltukhanHey[Hello,] Native speaker
Dear Ms. S,
I will be graduating in September 2007 with a Bachelor of Science degree in Industrial Engineering and I believe my qualifications would be consistent with those desired by your firm.
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