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Mk_nepal Posted 17 years ago
Letter Writing

Corrections on my English writing

Guru,

I would be most grateful if you could correct my English below. Thank you very much in advance.

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Boss,

I would like to have Internet setup at my home as other IT Managers in the regional have this facility at their residence. The main reason for this are:

1. to check IT system remotely
2. to read computer related news as I do not have time do it in the office – covering two offices
3. to check and let remote working users know on the remote access availabilities
4. to communicate with HQ Helpdesk in case of our local network failure
5. to work from home in case of Bandh (strike)

I would be very grateful if you could support and forward it to the Head of Office for her approval. Thanks.

Regards, MK
  

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Boss, I would like to have an internet setup at my home since* other IT managers in the region have this facility at their resididence. The main reason s for this are: 1. No corrections 2.

  • Boss, I would like to have an internet setup at my home since* other IT managers in the region have this facility at their resididence.
  • The main reason s for this are: 1.
  • No corrections 2.
  • To read computer-related news since* I do not have time to do this in the office-- covering two offices (?
  • not sure what you mean) 3.
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Boss,
I would like to have an internet setup at my home since* other IT managers in the region have this facility at their resididence. The main reasons for this are:

1. No corrections
2. To read computer-related news since* I do not have time to do this in the office--covering two offices (? not sure what you mean)
3. To check f

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