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Perfect Stranger Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

[corrections needed] could you please have a look at what I've written?

Dear Users,

Could you please have a look at the following sentences and help me fix errors, if there are any? Perhaps the whole thing looks a bit too informal?

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to inquire about the possibility of migrating to Canada. If this is not the right place to submit this kind inquiry, I would be grateful if you could inform me where I could submit my queries.

I am a European citizen of 32 years currently residing in China. I am seriously considering migrating to Canada, but I do not know if it is possible. I am also considering going back to university in order to enhance my career opportunities, and Canadian universities seem to be a very good choice. Are there any loans that international students can take?

With kind regards,

XYZ
  

Top answer

I would make only these modifications: Perfect Stranger I would like to inquire about the possibility of migrating to Canada. If this is not the right place to submit this kind of inquiry, I would be grateful if you could inform me where I could submit my queries. I am 32 years old and an European citizen that currently residing in China.

— Anon203c8

  • I would make only these modifications: Perfect Stranger I would like to inquire about the possibility of migrating to Canada.
  • If this is not the right place to submit this kind of inquiry, I would be grateful if you could inform me where I could submit my queries.
  • I am 32 years old and an European citizen that currently residing in China.
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I would make only these modifications:
Perfect Stranger I would like to inquire about the possibility of migrating to Canada. If this is not the right place to submit this kind of inquiry, I would be grateful if you could inform me where I could submit my queries.
I am 32 years old and an European citizen that currently residing
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Thanks.

I think it should be I am 32 years old and a European citizen that is currently residing in China, though
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Perfect Strangera European
Yes, you are right. I don't know why I didn't attend to it well. Emotion: smile
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Franky12I think it also makes sense without is.
Not if the relative pronoun is used.
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fivejedjonNot if the relative pronoun is used.
I understand that that would be considered as a relative pronoun (?)
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