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Vincent Teo Posted 17 years ago
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Corrections - about the canteen (a)
Can I say,
At the canteen, a boy was in a queue at the noodle stall. After paying (the money), he was going to find the seat to have his delicious breakfast. Just then, John raced to the canteen. Some pupils shouted out a warning but it was too late. He accidentally ran into the boy who was holding a bowl of soup.
Anyone can give me comments?
At the canteen, a boy was in a queue at the noodle stall. After paying (the money), he was going to find the seat to have his delicious breakfast. Just then, John raced to the canteen. Some pupils shouted out a warning but it was too late. He accidentally ran into the boy who was holding a bowl of soup.
Anyone can give me comments?
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I tried to write it in a short paragraph, anyone can give me the comments?
- I tried to write it in a short paragraph, anyone can give me the comments?
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I tried to write it in a short paragraph, anyone can give me the comments?
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