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Vincent Teo Posted 18 years ago
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corrections - about buying shoe
Please help me to correct the sentences.
Last week, Alice wanted to buy shoes for her birthday present. When she arrived, she saw many new arrival children shoes. The shop design also very good. She went inside to look for some shoes.
All the sizes, colours and designs were in the latest styles. She took many types of different shoes and tried them on. After a short while, she already tried on almost 50 shoes in that shop.
She disliked all the shoes. So, she left the shop without buying anything. The salesgirl was angry because Alice made the floor messy.
Last week, Alice wanted to buy shoes for her birthday present. When she arrived, she saw many new arrival children shoes. The shop design also very good. She went inside to look for some shoes.
All the sizes, colours and designs were in the latest styles. She took many types of different shoes and tried them on. After a short while, she already tried on almost 50 shoes in that shop.
She disliked all the shoes. So, she left the shop without buying anything. The salesgirl was angry because Alice made the floor messy.
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Are you saying that she wanted to buy a birthday present for herself?? many new arrivals of children's shoes. / many newly arrived children's shoes.
- Are you saying that she wanted to buy a birthday present for herself??
- many new arrivals of children's shoes.
- / many newly arrived children's shoes.
- The shop also offers shoes which are designed and made on the premises, and these also looked very good.
- (This is extremely rare these days in the US.
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Are you saying that she wanted to buy a birthday present for herself??
many new arrivals of children's shoes. / many newly arrived children's shoes.
The shop also offers shoes which are designed and made on the premises, and these also looked very good. (This is extremely rare these days in the US. Nobody has these skills anymore, and they would be very expensive.)
many new arrivals of children's shoes. / many newly arrived children's shoes.
The shop also offers shoes which are designed and made on the premises, and these also looked very good. (This is extremely rare these days in the US. Nobody has these skills anymore, and they would be very expensive.)
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