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Can I say,

(a) The men looked strange because they didn't buy any jewellery. I did not take notice until

I heard someone ordered us to raise both of our hands.

(b) I saw 2 masked men pulled out a pistol and pointed at one of the customers. They were

burglars.

(c) The burglars ordered us to queue and put all of our valuables into a sack. The other

burglar went to put all the jewelleries into another sack.

(d) They tied all of us using a thick rope. A hiding assistant saw what happened and set off

the burglar alarm.