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Vincent Teo Posted 19 years ago
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(a) After visiting the vegetable farm and (the) orchard farm / orchard fruit / fruit orchard, Lee Ming’s father came to fetch him home.
(b) When he reached his farm, he saw many types of vegetable, chicks and more on the farm.
(c) Last weekend was / were a fine day, He helped Uncle Loo collect the fruit / fruits and vegetables in a rattan basket.
(d) After he took / had his breakfast, Uncle Loo brought him to his poultry farm which is near / near to his house. After that, he took Lee Meng to visit his own vegetable farm.
(e) His farm is at / in the countryside of Seremban. He lives in a courtyside.
(f) He stayed at Uncle Loo’s farmyard for a day. His farm was very big and his land was fertile. (How do I make it more natural?)
(b) When he reached his farm, he saw many types of vegetable, chicks and more on the farm.
(c) Last weekend was / were a fine day, He helped Uncle Loo collect the fruit / fruits and vegetables in a rattan basket.
(d) After he took / had his breakfast, Uncle Loo brought him to his poultry farm which is near / near to his house. After that, he took Lee Meng to visit his own vegetable farm.
(e) His farm is at / in the countryside of Seremban. He lives in a courtyside.
(f) He stayed at Uncle Loo’s farmyard for a day. His farm was very big and his land was fertile. (How do I make it more natural?)
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Vincent Teo (a) After visiting the vegetable farm and (the) orchard farm / orchard fruit / fruit orchard, Lee Ming’s father came to fetch him home. [Y] (b) When he reached his farm, he saw many types of vegetable, chicks and more on the farm . Does the farm belong to him?
- Vincent Teo (a) After visiting the vegetable farm and (the) orchard farm / orchard fruit / fruit orchard, Lee Ming’s father came to fetch him home.
- [Y] (b) When he reached his farm, he saw many types of vegetable, chicks and more on the farm .
- Does the farm belong to him?
- If not , then "the farm".
- Do not repeat "the farm" in the sentence - use a pronoun - he saw....
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Vincent Teo(a) After visiting the vegetable farm and (the) orchard farm / orchard fruit / fruit orchard, Lee Ming’s father came to fetch him home. [Y]
(b) When he reached his farm, he saw many types of vegetable, chicks and more on the farm. Does the farm belong to him? If
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