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Vincent Teo Posted 19 years ago
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Can I say,

(a) He was cycling to a shop to buy some sundries

(b) Every evening, he loves to ride his bike to the park.

(c) While cycling down the slope, he lost control.

He lost control while cycling down the slope and fell off.

(d) Luckily there was a man passed by the slope and helped John to send him home.

(f) After John arrived home, His parents were shocked to see his leg was seriouly injured.

(g) His father reminded him to be careful when he was riding on the bike.

He promised that he will be careful next time.

(i) His parents asked him what happened to him. HIs mother treated his wound carefullly /

gently.

(j) He told his parents about the incidents happened just now.
  

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-- OK (c) While cycling down the slope, he lost control. -- OK He lost control while cycling down the slope and fell off. -- OK (d) Luckily there was a man passing by the slope who helped send John home .

  • -- OK (c) While cycling down the slope, he lost control.
  • -- OK He lost control while cycling down the slope and fell off.
  • -- OK (d) Luckily there was a man passing by the slope who helped send John home .
  • (f) When John arrived home, his parents were shocked to see that his leg was seriously injured.
  • (g) His father reminded him to be careful when he was riding on the bike.
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(a) He was cycling to a shop to buy some sundries -- OK

(b) Every evening, he loves to ride his bike to the park.-- OK

(c) While cycling down the slope, he lost control. -- OK

He lost control while cycling down the slope and fell off. -- OK

(d) Luckily there was a man passing by the slope who helped send John home.

(f) When

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