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Kartik Raj Kanna Posted 15 years ago
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My question is based on my story :
I used the words "The sky was dark and the winds were strong. The town was filled with sorrow and all people were gloomy." Instead of " and all people were gloomy", can I use " and all were gloomy" ?
Can you explain the diffence between Bombarding and Bombing, please.
Thank You.
My question is based on my story :
I used the words "The sky was dark and the winds were strong. The town was filled with sorrow and all people were gloomy." Instead of " and all people were gloomy", can I use " and all were gloomy" ?
Can you explain the diffence between Bombarding and Bombing, please.
Thank You.
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The town was full of sorrow and everyone was gloomy. However, can a town be full of sorrow? ).
- The town was full of sorrow and everyone was gloomy.
- However, can a town be full of sorrow?
- ).
- You should rephrase.
- Use bombing instead of bombarding.
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The town was full of sorrow and everyone was gloomy.
However, can a town be full of sorrow?
The inhabitants of a town can be full of sorrow, but towns are generally filled with things (buildings, people, animals, etc.). You should rephrase.
Use bombing instead of bombarding.
However, can a town be full of sorrow?
The inhabitants of a town can be full of sorrow, but towns are generally filled with things (buildings, people, animals, etc.). You should rephrase.
Use bombing instead of bombarding.
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Thank You John, please see if this sentance is better.
KRK
Thank You,
The city of Brasilia was constantly bombed by the terrorists who were rumoured to be staying in the Amazon Forest. The people of Brasilia were full of sorrow and gloom....
KRK
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