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Vincent Teo Posted 18 years ago
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Last Sunday afternoon, it was windy. Susan was walking alone in the town. She brought along her handbag to a shop in the town. She wanted to buy some bracelets for her mother on the Mother's Day.
Suddenly, a man riding his motorcycle snatched her handbag. She was shocked in a sudden. After that, the motorcyclist sped away as fast as he could. She was very scared because a lot of money in her bag.
Susan shouted loudly when the man rode away on his motorcycle. Some men ran to chase the motorcyclist while some men ran out from the jewellery shop. They chased the motorcyclist. It was too late because the motorcyclist had run away.
Last Sunday afternoon, it was windy. Susan was walking alone in the town. She brought along her handbag to a shop in the town. She wanted to buy some bracelets for her mother on the Mother's Day.
Suddenly, a man riding his motorcycle snatched her handbag. She was shocked in a sudden. After that, the motorcyclist sped away as fast as he could. She was very scared because a lot of money in her bag.
Susan shouted loudly when the man rode away on his motorcycle. Some men ran to chase the motorcyclist while some men ran out from the jewellery shop. They chased the motorcyclist. It was too late because the motorcyclist had run away.
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Last Sunday afternoon, when it was very windy, Susan was out shopping in town, and had brought along her handbag. She wanted to buy her mother some bracelets for Mother's Day. Suddenly, a man on a motorcycle snatched her handbag, and sped away as fast as he could.
- Last Sunday afternoon, when it was very windy, Susan was out shopping in town, and had brought along her handbag.
- She wanted to buy her mother some bracelets for Mother's Day.
- Suddenly, a man on a motorcycle snatched her handbag, and sped away as fast as he could.
- Shocked, Susan shouted loudly at the motorcyclist riding away.
- She was very upset because a lot of money was in the bag.
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Last Sunday afternoon, when it was very windy, Susan was out shopping in town, and had brought along her handbag. She wanted to buy her mother some bracelets for Mother's Day.
Suddenly, a man on a motorcycle snatched her handbag, and sped away as fast as he could.
Shocked, Susan shouted loudly at the motorcyclist riding away. She was very upset because a lot of money was in the
Suddenly, a man on a motorcycle snatched her handbag, and sped away as fast as he could.
Shocked, Susan shouted loudly at the motorcyclist riding away. She was very upset because a lot of money was in the
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