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Vincent Teo Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

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Can I say,

(a) He wears pyjamas when he wants to sleep.

(b) The hippopotamus is having its bathing at the river.

(c) The garbage trunk clears away rubbish every week.
He takes the rubbish to the garbage trunk every week.

(d) She like to swing.
They are sitting on the swings.

(e) They are walking carefully on the road.
They walk carefully.

(f) The birds are on the electric cable.

(g) He is repairing the broken / spoil roof.
  

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Hi Vincent, Can you please help us by underlining the part of each sentence that you are not clear about? For example, which part of this sentence is causing you trouble? They are sitting on the swings.

  • Hi Vincent, Can you please help us by underlining the part of each sentence that you are not clear about?
  • For example, which part of this sentence is causing you trouble?
  • They are sitting on the swings.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi Vincent,
Can you please help us by underlining the part of each sentence that you are not clear about?

For example, which part of this sentence is causing you trouble?
They are sitting on the swings.

Best wishes, Clive
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Ok, I try to underline:

(a) He wears pyjamas when he wants to sleep.

(b) The hippopotamus is having its bathing at the river.

(c) The garbage trunk clears away rubbish every week.
He takes the rubbish to the garbage trunk every week.

(d) She like to swing.
They are sitting on the swings.

(e)
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Hi again,
Ok, I try to underline:

(a) He wears pyjamas when he wants to sleep.

(b) The hippopotamus is having its bath at the river.

(c) The garbage trunk clears away rubbish every week.
He takes the rubbish to the garbage dump every week.

(d) She likes to swing.
They are sitting on the swings.

(e) They are walking carefully on
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Hi again,
Ok, I try to underline:

(a) He wears pyjamas when he wants to sleep.

(b) The hippopotamus is having its bath at the river.

(c) The garbage trunk clears away rubbish every week.
He takes the rubbish to the garbage dump every week.

(d) She likes to swing.
They are sitting on the swings.

(e) They are walking carefully on
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Your trouble is misusing tenses and very awkawrd sentence strucuture. Your sentences have tendency to sound redudnat and repatitious. i.e.
He wears pyjamas when he wants to sleep.


(a) He wears pyjamas when he wants to sleep. - improved version: He usually wears pyjamas to sleep

b) The hippopotamus ishaving its bathing at the river. - The hippopotamus is bathing in / a

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