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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Dear Sir/Madam,

I feel that I would be a valuable candidate in your organization, as my current work experience in technical field has enabled me to fit into the field of IT. My technical skills have exposed me to all aspects of computer and network related dilemmas, including hardware and software installations, upgrading, and troubleshooting. My exceptional skills in Windows Operating Systems & Servers, LAN, WAN and Wireless-Networks designing, installation, configuration and securing networks allow me to effectively deliver high-quality results. Holding a degree of Bachelor of Computer Science and Information Technology degree from ***, [City Name], [country name] and Distinction in [coourse], [univ, city, country] supports my skills as mentioned. Beside this I have also completed Cisco Certified Network Associate (CCNA 640-801) certification, MCSE 2003 training and Cisco Firewalls training courses.

Being a fast learner with strong creative, analytical, and interpersonal skills, I believe my experience in this area would make a great contribution to your organization. I am an enthusiastic person who enjoys working in a team environment.

I have submitted my resume for your perusal. If you require any additional information, please contact me at Emotion: phone. Thank you in advance for your consideration.

Sincerely,
[name]

please help me to correct this cover letter

Thanks
  

Top answer

Hi, I just have time for a quick comment. You need to start by stating your objective clearly. eg I am interested in a position as a systems analyst.

  • Hi, I just have time for a quick comment.
  • You need to start by stating your objective clearly.
  • eg I am interested in a position as a systems analyst.
  • Or a programmer.
  • Or a database administrator.
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Hi,

I just have time for a quick comment.

You need to start by stating your objective clearly.

eg I am interested in a position as a systems analyst.

Or a programmer. Or a database administrator. Or a janitor.

The person who reades your letter needs to know quickly, 'What specifically does he/she want?'

Best wishes, Clive
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so when would i expect a proper reply from you.

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