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Mr. Tom Posted 15 years ago
Vocabulary
Correction required in "Experience Letter"
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Could you please tell me if the following "Experience Letter" sounds OK to your native ears? Any suggestions are welcome.
To Whom It May Concern
This is to certify that Mr. Azim Tariq, bearing passport number ********, has worked in this organisation in the following capacities.
English teacher (0-level) [1979 – 1984]
Head of English Department [1984 – 1990]
Principal [1990 – 1994]
He resigned from his services in June 1994 for better prospects abroad. We wish him all the best in his future endeavors.
Thanks,
Tom
Could you please tell me if the following "Experience Letter" sounds OK to your native ears? Any suggestions are welcome.
To Whom It May Concern
This is to certify that Mr. Azim Tariq, bearing passport number ********, has worked in this organisation in the following capacities.
English teacher (0-level) [1979 – 1984]
Head of English Department [1984 – 1990]
Principal [1990 – 1994]
He resigned from his services in June 1994 for better prospects abroad. We wish him all the best in his future endeavors.
Thanks,
Tom
Top answer
I'd just remove a bit of clutter (see below); otherwise, it sounds fine for this kind of experience letter. (Some experience letters used as references for future employment go into considerable detail on responsibilities, skills and abilities, etc. ) To Whom It May Concern This is to certify that Mr.
- I'd just remove a bit of clutter (see below); otherwise, it sounds fine for this kind of experience letter.
- (Some experience letters used as references for future employment go into considerable detail on responsibilities, skills and abilities, etc.
- ) To Whom It May Concern This is to certify that Mr.
- Azim Tariq, passport number ********, has worked in this organisation in the following capacities: English teacher (0-level) 1979 – 1984 Head of English Department 1984 – 1990 Principal 1990 – 1994 He resigned in June 1994 for better prospects abroad.
- We wish him all the best in his future endeavors.
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I'd just remove a bit of clutter (see below); otherwise, it sounds fine for this kind of experience letter. (Some experience letters used as references for future employment go into considerable detail on responsibilities, skills and abilities, etc. This sounds more like an employment record.)
To Whom It May Concern
This is to certify that Mr. Azim Tariq, passport numbe
To Whom It May Concern
This is to certify that Mr. Azim Tariq, passport numbe
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