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Mk_nepal Posted 19 years ago
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00We, all staff here are using desktop. But <abc> used the pool laptop of which had to return to the pool after using. 02br
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00Sorry we are unable to return that laptop as we have limited number of laptops in our pool.02br
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00Regards,02br
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1font 00Hi,02font 02br 02br 01font 00I have suggested a few changes, but really I am confused by what you are saying. You can'00t return the laptop to the pool because there are a limited number of laptops in the pool? 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Best wishes, Clive02font 02br 02br 00Dear <xyz>02br 02br 00All of us here use desktop computers.

  • 1font 00Hi,02font 02br 02br 01font 00I have suggested a few changes, but really I am confused by what you are saying.
  • You can'00t return the laptop to the pool because there are a limited number of laptops in the pool?
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Best wishes, Clive02font 02br 02br 00Dear <xyz>02br 02br 00All of us here use desktop computers.
  • However, <abc> used the pool laptop, which he (or she) was supposed to return to the pool afterwards.
  • 02br 02br 00Regards,0-
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1font00Hi,02font02br
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01font00I have suggested a few changes, but really I am confused by what you are saying. You can'00t return the laptop to the pool because there are a limited number of laptops in the pool? What does that mean?02font02br
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0Thanks Clive,02br
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00This is actually <xyz> has requested me to return the laptop during <abc> was working in Nepal. And <xyz> is working in another country and I am in charge of the pool (Nepal).02br
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00Hope this is clear.0-

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