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Braveheart77 Posted 17 years ago
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Correction please!!

Hi, is the below email is ok



Dear All,



It was pleasure meeting you today.



I would like to highlight the points discussed today :



- Current network connectivity of ABC through XXX is acceptable

- The proposed solution will be 300mb, but this shared bandwidth is utilized by other clients

- The user base in XXX is large(3000 users concurrently) and should be seriously considered if to be migrated to the proposed solution

- the migration target date will be end of the year

Thank you
  

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Dear all, It was a pleasure meeting you today. The user base in *** is large ( 3000 users ), and should be seriously considered if it is to be migrated to the proposed solution. The migration target date is the end of the year (or better to give a specific date like Dec.

— Anonymous

  • Dear all, It was a pleasure meeting you today.
  • The user base in *** is large ( 3000 users ), and should be seriously considered if it is to be migrated to the proposed solution.
  • The migration target date is the end of the year (or better to give a specific date like Dec.
  • 31).
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Dear all,
It was a pleasure meeting you today.

.........

The user base in *** is large (3000 users), and should be seriously considered if it is to be migrated to the proposed solution.

The migration target date is the end of the year (or better to give a specific date like Dec. 31).
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