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Ben9108 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar
correction on complaint
0 Would you mind give me some correction on the letter as below? 02 br
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01 u 00 Complaint Letter 02 u 02 br
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00 We write to express our dissatisfaction on your technical supporting service during the past few months under our contract with the supplier of ABC Air Flow. 02 br
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00 We have requested your company several times to provide technical advice on A/C split type unit installation in order to assist us in our project handover. However, your technical staff working attitude and performance is totally intolerable. We feel disappointed to hear your staff impolite response and surprise to know that as “Mitsubishi” one of the leading companies in China providing equipment, your services just like the small shop without any professional support and responsibility. 02 br
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00 The above matter have been arousing serious concerns from the client. Furthermore, we are considering taking your company out from our supplier list. 02 br
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00 Thank you for your kind attention. 0-
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01 u 00 Complaint Letter 02 u 02 br
02 br
00 We write to express our dissatisfaction on your technical supporting service during the past few months under our contract with the supplier of ABC Air Flow. 02 br
02 br
00 We have requested your company several times to provide technical advice on A/C split type unit installation in order to assist us in our project handover. However, your technical staff working attitude and performance is totally intolerable. We feel disappointed to hear your staff impolite response and surprise to know that as “Mitsubishi” one of the leading companies in China providing equipment, your services just like the small shop without any professional support and responsibility. 02 br
02 br
00 The above matter have been arousing serious concerns from the client. Furthermore, we are considering taking your company out from our supplier list. 02 br
02 br
00 Thank you for your kind attention. 0-
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02 br 02 br 00 We have asked your company several times to provide technical advice on A/C split type unit installation in order to assist us in our project handover. However, your technical staff's working attitude and performance is totally intolerable. 02 br 02 br 00 The above matter has been creating serious concerns for the client.
- 02 br 02 br 00 We have asked your company several times to provide technical advice on A/C split type unit installation in order to assist us in our project handover.
- However, your technical staff's working attitude and performance is totally intolerable.
- 02 br 02 br 00 The above matter has been creating serious concerns for the client.
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1 u 00 Complaint Letter 02 u 02 br
02 br
00 We write to express our dissatisfaction with your technical support service during the past few months under our contract with the supplier of ABC Air Flow. 02 br
02 br
00 We have asked your company several times to provide technical advice on A/C split type unit installation in order to assist us in our proje
02 br
00 We write to express our dissatisfaction with your technical support service during the past few months under our contract with the supplier of ABC Air Flow. 02 br
02 br
00 We have asked your company several times to provide technical advice on A/C split type unit installation in order to assist us in our proje
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0 Have any other adjective in lieu of the following phase? 02 br
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01 font 00 "like a small shop" 02 font 0-
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01 font 00 "like a small shop" 02 font 0-
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0 Ben9108, 02 br
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00 I think it would make it easier for those of us who try to help you if you just keep your questions in the same posting instead of creating new post for the same topic. 02 br
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00 Be careful with the word "arousing" which means sexual excitation. It was imporperly used in your context of the letter. 0-
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00 I think it would make it easier for those of us who try to help you if you just keep your questions in the same posting instead of creating new post for the same topic. 02 br
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00 Be careful with the word "arousing" which means sexual excitation. It was imporperly used in your context of the letter. 0-
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01 cite 10 Ben9108 12 cite 12 br
10 Would you mind give me some correction on the letter as below? 12 br
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11 u 10 Complaint Letter 12 u 12 br
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10 We write to express our dissatisfaction on your technical supporting service during the past few months under our contract with the supplier
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