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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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correction of this sentence please

I am not sure if this sentence is right ,can some one help me to right it correctly

thanks



I had the opportunity to meet and work with her at mercy and I was pleased with her enthusiasm and compassion towards patients



  

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Hi, I had the opportunity to meet and work with her at mercy Hospital and I was pleased with her enthusiasm and compassion towards patients. Seems OK to me. You need a capital M because Mercy is a proper name.

— Clive

  • Hi, I had the opportunity to meet and work with her at mercy Hospital and I was pleased with her enthusiasm and compassion towards patients.
  • Seems OK to me.
  • You need a capital M because Mercy is a proper name.
  • You might put a comma after hospital.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

I had the opportunity to meet and work with her at mercy Hospital and I was pleased with her enthusiasm and compassion towards patients.

Seems OK to me. You need a capital M because Mercy is a proper name. You might put a comma after hospital.

Best wishes, Clive
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