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Marold Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Correction of one paragraph

"The submitted work is not meant to be a textbook on carbazolones, but a clearly arranged set of some important carbazolones derivatives and it requires a certain knowledge of some branches of biology and chemistry. In this work each individual derivate should be logically categorized according to its significance, both the artificially synthesized and natural substances. With every derivate the chemical composition, its biological effect and synthesis should be mentioned. Due to the broad spectrum of their biological activity these derivates have a wide range of applications, especially in the pharmaceutical industry."

I would deeply appreciate it if you could correct the above-mentioned paragraph.

Thanks a lot in advance.
  

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I'll try, although I am not familiar with your topic. "The submitted work is not meant to be a textbook on carbazolones, but rather a clearly arranged set of some important carbazolones derivatives. It requires a certain knowledge of some branches of biology and chemistry.

  • I'll try, although I am not familiar with your topic.
  • "The submitted work is not meant to be a textbook on carbazolones, but rather a clearly arranged set of some important carbazolones derivatives.
  • It requires a certain knowledge of some branches of biology and chemistry.
  • In this work each individual derivate is logically categorized according to its significance, both the artificially synthesized and natural substances.
  • With every derivate the chemical composition, its biological effect , comma and its synthesis is given.
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I'll try, although I am not familiar with your topic.

"The submitted work is not meant to be a textbook on carbazolones, but rather a clearly arranged set of some important carbazolones derivatives. It requires a certain knowledge of some branches of biology and chemistry. In this work each individual derivate is logically categorized according to its significa
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Thanks heaps, Clive.Emotion: smile

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