correction of my lyrics

0 Hi all!02br
00I wrote the lyrics for my latest song called "a new beginnig". Well, I'm from Germany and i speak german, so i don't know if my english is right.02br
00It would be nice if you read through the lyrics and tell me the grammar errors...02br
00Maybe the lines won't make sense at all. Feel free to interpret the lyrics as you like 05002br
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00a new beginning02br
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00tonight I'll change everything02br
00I swear the dying hope 02br
00will have counted down02br
00and last as just "the known"02br
00I can't go back02br
00I will leave this town02br
00I will try again02br
00and leave all the strain behind 02br
00your eyes02br
00haven't seen anything02br
00you would hate everything02br
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00it's a new beginning.02br
00where I'd used 02br
00to lock my time's02br
00where I refused02br
00the ocean holds02br
00the trust we've built02br
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00the risk is black02br
00i feel the thrill02br
00rushing down02br
00my neck until02br
00waves break onto02br
00the trust we've built02br
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00save me from all I know02br
00until I fall I'll show02br
00how I still pretend02br
00that everything's alright02br
00come on and hold me close02br
00breathing the cold air 02br
00flows down your face is mine02br
00and everything's alright02br
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00ambiguity02br
00will last02br
00I won't compare you02br
00with my past02br
00the red sand bears02br
00the hope we've felt02br
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00all the choices02br
00I have made02br
00are ever far behinde02br
00this game02br
00waves carry on02br
00the hope we've felt02br
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00save me from all I know02br
00until I fall I'll show02br
00how I still pretend02br
00that everything's alright02br
00come on and hold me close02br
00breathing the cold air 02br
00flows down your face is mine02br
00and everything's alright02br
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00the fate has come now02br
00waiting for02br
00for me to will now02br
00waiting short02br
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00and it's bleeding down this time02br
00and it's bleeding down this time010id1