Correction of my Letter of Motivation

Hello, I wrote my letter of motivation and I am unfortunately not an English native. Furthermore, I have nobody who could read through it and give me some advice. Therefore, I would be really happy if somebody would find the time to correct it. It is a club at my university.

(Start ) I am writing this letter with the intent of applying for the membership of the XY Club. I started with my XY studies at the XY this year, and I am convinced that this club is a great opportunity I can benefit from.

I have constantly been gravitating towards the issues of the economic field. Especially investing in stocks and companies as well as cryptocurrencies have drawn my attention for a long time. Read books, articles and watched documentaries about it, wanted to become active by investing, especially cryptocurrencies fascinated me. However, I had to acknowledge that my attraction was, unfortunately, paired with a paralyzing feeling of intimidation.

Although learning components of this spectrum in school and doing research on my own, the seemingly, interwoven chaotic surface together with the fast-paced environment, held me back from grasping the depth of investment.

My doubts as well as my fears, however, could never undermine this deep energy and will to scratch the surface to finally understand every angle of it, so I can become active. When I was chosen for a locally highly regarded Economical Summer Camp for a week, I noticed that the intimidation was caused by the lack of practice and exchange with other experienced people.

Exclusive unique workshops, practical work in teams and possibilities to interact with experienced people, could help exposing my weaknesses, leading to an expansion of my knowledge and development of something more than just a firm foundation.

To sum up, the program of your club clearly provides valuable content which would finally encourage me to become confidential active. Besides, a personal combination of my background, XY, along with finance experience would definitely lead to success in achieving long-term goals.