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Stecoondra Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Correction of a text

Hello,
I would really appreciate your help with correcting my English homework.
Thank you very much
Andrew

Text:

Dear Mrs Brown,

I would like to apologize you for not writing my essay yet. I was ill for the last 2 weeks. I was in the hospital and I couldn't write it. I’m well aware that we are supposed to send you our essay for tomorrow but I’m afraid I won’t have it. Is it possible to bring the project to you on Tuesday ?

Thank you
  

Top answer

I'll underline some problem areas. Dear Mrs Brown, I would like to apologize you for not writing my essay yet. I was ill for the last 2 weeks.

  • I'll underline some problem areas.
  • Dear Mrs Brown, I would like to apologize you for not writing my essay yet.
  • I was ill for the last 2 weeks.
  • I was in the hospital and I couldn't write it.
  • I’m well aware that we are supposed to send you our essay for tomorrow but I’m afraid I won’t have it.
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I'll underline some problem areas.

Dear Mrs Brown,

I would like to apologize you for not writing my essay yet. I was ill for the last 2 weeks. I was in the hospital and I couldn't write it. I’m well aware that we are supposed to send you our essay for tomorrow but I’m afraid I won’t have it. Is it po
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So I tried to correct it: I would like to apologize for not writing my essay yet. We are supposed to send you our essay tomorrow.

Is it correct now ?
Thank you
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So I tried to correct it:

I would like to apologize for not writing my essay yet. OK

We are supposed to send you our essay tomorrow. OK, but 'tomorrow' is not the same as 'by tomorrow'.


send it tomorrow not today

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Thank you very much! You really helped me.
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