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Correction of a short movie review
Hi everyone! I would like you to check this short movie review and correct it.
I wrote it down but actually i have to present it orally so please check if there is any mistake.
Probably when we were child we all loved to invent magical and incredible stories but when we grow up we lose a bit of the imagination and the fantasy we had when we were younger.
With Big Fish, Tim Burton tries to bring back the child there is in all of us.
We met Edward Bloom, a really special man. I'm quite sure none of you has ever heard a story as incredible and amazing as the story of Edward's life.
Well, his son Will is a bit tired of hearing it and can't stand his father's lies anymore. However, soon he will discover that there is way more truth in Edwards's stories than he tought.
Among giants, witches and mysterious towns, the real discovery Will makes is that magic and reality can live togethere in a perfect balance.
Edward Bloom teaches his son and us all to look at the world as a big fairy tale where everything is possible!
Magic is not just about wands and enchantments, there is magic in every story we tell, in every book we read and every movie we watch.
Magic is immagination and it is everywhere.
I wrote it down but actually i have to present it orally so please check if there is any mistake.
Probably when we were child we all loved to invent magical and incredible stories but when we grow up we lose a bit of the imagination and the fantasy we had when we were younger.
With Big Fish, Tim Burton tries to bring back the child there is in all of us.
We met Edward Bloom, a really special man. I'm quite sure none of you has ever heard a story as incredible and amazing as the story of Edward's life.
Well, his son Will is a bit tired of hearing it and can't stand his father's lies anymore. However, soon he will discover that there is way more truth in Edwards's stories than he tought.
Among giants, witches and mysterious towns, the real discovery Will makes is that magic and reality can live togethere in a perfect balance.
Edward Bloom teaches his son and us all to look at the world as a big fairy tale where everything is possible!
Magic is not just about wands and enchantments, there is magic in every story we tell, in every book we read and every movie we watch.
Magic is immagination and it is everywhere.
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Hi everyone! I would like you to Can someone please check this short movie review and correct i t? I wrote it dow n, but actuall y, I have to present it orall y, so please check if there is any mistake.
- Hi everyone!
- I would like you to Can someone please check this short movie review and correct i t?
- I wrote it dow n, but actuall y, I have to present it orall y, so please check if there is any mistake.
- Probably W hen we were child ren, we probably all loved to invent magical and incredible storie s, but when after we grow u p, we lose a bit of the imagination and the fantasy we had when we were younger.
- With Big Fish, Tim Burton tries to bring back the child there is in all of us.
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Hi everyone! I would like you to Can someone please check this short movie review and correct it?
I wrote it down, but actually, I have to present it orally, so please check if there is any mistake.
Probably When we were children, we probably all loved to invent magical and incredible stories,
I wrote it down, but actually, I have to present it orally, so please check if there is any mistake.
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