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Lcchang Posted 19 years ago
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Could you please correct the following writing? Thank you.
One day Mary ran into her old friend on her way home. They hadn't seen each other for a long while, so Mary decided to find a place for more chat. She first called her boyfriend to cancel the date with him that night. On hearing it, he was quite annoyed but couldn't help it. Then the girls spent a wonderful time and meal together at a restaurant from six to nine.
LCChang
One day Mary ran into her old friend on her way home. They hadn't seen each other for a long while, so Mary decided to find a place for more chat. She first called her boyfriend to cancel the date with him that night. On hearing it, he was quite annoyed but couldn't help it. Then the girls spent a wonderful time and meal together at a restaurant from six to nine.
LCChang
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Hi, One day Mary ran into her old friend on her way home. They hadn't seen each other for a long while, so Mary decided to find a place for more chat. She first called her boyfriend to cancel the date with him that night.
- Hi, One day Mary ran into her old friend on her way home.
- They hadn't seen each other for a long while, so Mary decided to find a place for more chat.
- She first called her boyfriend to cancel the date with him that night.
- On hearing it, he was quite annoyed but couldn't help it.
- Then the girls spent a wonderful time and meal together at a restaurant from six to nine.
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Hi,
One day Mary ran into her old friend on her way home. They hadn't seen each other for a long while, so Mary decided to find a place for more chat. She first called her boyfriend to cancel the date with him that night. On hearing it, he was quite annoyed but couldn't help it. Then the girls spent a wonderful time and meal together at a restaurant from six to nine.
One day Mary ran into her old friend on her way home. They hadn't seen each other for a long while, so Mary decided to find a place for more chat. She first called her boyfriend to cancel the date with him that night. On hearing it, he was quite annoyed but couldn't help it. Then the girls spent a wonderful time and meal together at a restaurant from six to nine.
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