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00My name is Samundeeswari. iam applying for PHd position in abroad, particularly in germany. I applied in Graduate school. For that I have to prepare the motivation letter. I have written my letter. 02br
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00My desire to study Chemistry is to become a well known scientist in the world. I decided at the age of 18 that I wanted to be a Scientist. I truly have a passion for Chemistry and I chose it because I believe I can excel in it.00 00In order to perform better in this field my desire has been to do a PhD degree which exposes me to multicultural experiences and multi disciplinary perspectives on current research. Because of this, I am very passionate about studying a program that is internationally oriented, allowing me to broaden my horizons to an even greater extent, which not only develops my state of awareness, but also my future career goals.02br
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00I have completed my bachelor and Master degree from Madurai Kamaraj University.00 00As a class topper and University Third rank Holder, I decided to pursue M.Phil in chemistry. I was in a situation to quit my M.Phil due to my family problem. Yes, my mother was ill at that time. As an elder child in my family, I was supposed to go to the Job to fulfill my family requirements. I have opted for medicinal chemistry job which is based on chemistry and biology. During my career, I am always curious and enthusiastic, since I knew that to pursue a scientific career; I have to learn more about in chemistry. I am promoted as a team leader due to my excellent knowledge in medicinal chemistry. During this time, I explored several latent aspects of my personality and professionalism as well. I developed my 01a01span00professional skills02span02a00 which helped fine-tune my ability to work hard and with sincerity, persistence, motivation, and resilience. 02br
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00To further my career aspirations of becoming part of the scientific world, I realize I must learn and study further, by obtaining a doctoral degree. I strongly believe that the strong theoretical knowledge from my education and my present job as Research as well as the practical experience that I gained during my Master degree stint will enable me to pursue this doctorate degree. As M.Sc. Class topper and University 3rd Rank holder, I assure you that I can master any technique in short span of time.02br
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00 00I came to know that Germany is encouraging young aspiring scientists; I would like to continue my studies in Germany. I hope you will consider me for acceptance to your university. It would be a great experience to attend this school and continue my 01a01span00education02span02a00 here; I am looking forward to hearing from you.0-