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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
CORRECTION I've made to sentences, need help making sure
Could you please help me with this?
1 You could have a small house but if it's displayed properly, than it could look bigger than it actually is. I don't know how to say this. DISPLAYED isn't the word??
2 You have a better chance of winning when there are 10 people than when there are 15./It's better (when it is) hot than cold. Let me warm the dish up for you. both, WHEN IT IS is optional.
3 It's not that I'm not happy with my husband, I'm just not miserable. I'm content with my life. OK
4 We left the movie theatre 10 minutes before the end of the movie./to the end of the movie. NOT SURE
5 When she has her pacifier in her mouth, it means that she's tired. OK
6 He'll never have the same relationship with his dad as you have with yours as his dad is not as open to everything. Because his dad... TOO MANY "AS"
7 I'm the prettiest of the 3 girls. OK
Thank you
1 You could have a small house but if it's displayed properly, than it could look bigger than it actually is. I don't know how to say this. DISPLAYED isn't the word??
2 You have a better chance of winning when there are 10 people than when there are 15./It's better (when it is) hot than cold. Let me warm the dish up for you. both, WHEN IT IS is optional.
3 It's not that I'm not happy with my husband, I'm just not miserable. I'm content with my life. OK
4 We left the movie theatre 10 minutes before the end of the movie./to the end of the movie. NOT SURE
5 When she has her pacifier in her mouth, it means that she's tired. OK
6 He'll never have the same relationship with his dad as you have with yours as his dad is not as open to everything. Because his dad... TOO MANY "AS"
7 I'm the prettiest of the 3 girls. OK
Thank you
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1. Are you selling the hourse? If so, this is fine.
2. Use 'when' in the first! 'It's better hot than cold' is natural.
3. ok
4. before
5. ok
6. it's ok
7. ok
2. Use 'when' in the first! 'It's better hot than cold' is natural.
3. ok
4. before
5. ok
6. it's ok
7. ok
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