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Hamadresh Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

correction if you think of better writing

I have extensive experience within this field because I have extensive experience within this field. In the mean time I am working as a volunteer with infrastructure team at hauptbahnhof refugee centre, building washbasin and preparing temporary shelter. Liaising with all other parties including the transportation, social media and medical treatment and legal advice.
In my most recent role as a coordinator with UAE Red Cross my duties included the following: The initial design and co- ordination of Bahraka Refugee Camp and residential housing scheme in the Abril/Kurdistan region in the north of Iraq supervising site activities, including the UAE Red Cross representative pre-project study and site investigation and approval of Kazir Camp west of Arbil.
  

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hamadresh I have extensive experience within this field because I have extensive experience within this field. I have a rose. I know it is a rose because it is a rose.

  • hamadresh I have extensive experience within this field because I have extensive experience within this field.
  • I have a rose.
  • I know it is a rose because it is a rose.
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hamadreshI have extensive experience within this field because I have extensive experience within this field.
I have a rose. I know it is a rose because it is a rose.
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At present, I am working as a volunteer with infrastructure team at the Hauptbahnhof Refugee Centre, building washbasins and preparing temporary shelters.

Liaising with all other parties including the transportation, social media and medical treatment and legal advice. (That is not a sentence. It does not make sense. I cannot liaise with "advic
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Thank very for your comments these are is my week points in writing letters and always mixing sentences ...I appreciate if you looked again in my attached letter and delete or correct the sentences on which you think it is necessary to change .

I have extensive experience within this field because I have extensive experience within this field. In the mean time I am working as a volunteer
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I have extensive experience within this field because I have extensive experience within this field. (That is like saying "I am cold and wet because I am cold and wet." instead of saying: I am cold because I forgot to bring my coat and umbrella." Your sentence is logical nonsense.)
In the mean time At present, ("In the
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nothing wrong to say**in the mean time* why is unlogic, we used in England at the beging as Moreover..Nevertheless...Pherhaps
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Sorry, this was an old version, I should have checked before I send it to you , my apology...I am not that stupid
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AlpheccaStars...please do the sentence correction of this,,,,,Dear travellers

My name is Tsewang Dorje, Tsangley is my nick name. I am native XYZ born in small village of Peru.

After my secondary school I stepped into tourism industry as freelance tour guide. Because I love to introduce history and cultural to people from other countries. So travel business is my sole hobby
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hamadreshnothing wrong to say*in the mean time why is unlogic,
Martha went to the store to do the weekly grocery shopping. In the mean time, her alcoholic son was at the house, breaking into the liquor cabinet.

To use "In the mean time", you need two different activities - one on one timeline in the story, and one on another.
That c
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DorjeAlpheccaStars...please do the sentence correction of this,,,,,Dear travellers
Hijacking someone else's thread is not polite.
Please start a new thread when you have a new topic.
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I like your correction and comments, although sometimes it sounds impolite and hash as your are dealing with your students. but I don't mind as long as you are doing a good job

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