0
Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

correction if needed

Yup we enjoyed the show Emotion: smile everything was spectacular specially the graphics they were using on stage and also the dresses.She performed really well ,her fat belly was shaking when she was dancing she needs to get in shape .
  

Top answer

She performed really well ,her fat belly was shaking when she was dancing she needs to get in shape . Yup, we enjoyed the show. Everything was spectacular, especially the graphics they were using on stage and also the dresses.

— Clive

  • She performed really well ,her fat belly was shaking when she was dancing she needs to get in shape .
  • Yup, we enjoyed the show.
  • Everything was spectacular, especially the graphics they were using on stage and also the dresses.
  • She performed really well.
  • Her fat belly was shaking when (while) she was dancing, so she needs to get in shape.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

2 Answers
0
Hi,
Yup we enjoyed the show Emotion: smile everything was spectacular specially the graphics they were using on stage and also the dresses.Sh
0

Related Questions