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Enkidu Posted 17 years ago
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thank you too much. (I translated the text below, but I never satisfied, because of limited time, I even could not check spellings.)







Showing Platform.



Restoring (this part is used in any place wished for)



Underground Cistern have been through various restorations to the present day. The first restoration of the Cistern, which was restored two times during Ottoman times, was fulliled by Architect Memet Aga of Kayseri in the term of Ahmet III. (1723) Second massive restoration of the Cistern hit upon the term of Sultan Abdulhamit II (1876-1909). At the Turkish Republic Period, the Cistern underwent restorations and reparations by Istanbul Metropolitan Municipality many times. Lastly, after extensive maintaneces and cleanings fullfilled between the years 1985- promenade platform was done and the Cistern was opened to visitors.



Along being a museum, this enigmatic site which is so to speak an integrated part to the programs of visiting, is a home for national and international cultural activities. This forest of columns that contributes much more flavour to the activities in terms of accoustic, offers unforgettable moments to its visitors.



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We would like to thank you for visiting Underground Cistern. We as Istanbul Metropolitan Municipality Cultur Co, also advise you to see over the Miniaturk in which the models of distinct works in Istanbul and Ankara are exhibithed, and the Panoroma 1453 History Museum which lies in Topkapi

  

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Hi, Here are a lot of edits and suggestions. I visited Istanbul and the Tokapi once, years ago. It was wonderful.

  • Hi, Here are a lot of edits and suggestions.
  • I visited Istanbul and the Tokapi once, years ago.
  • It was wonderful.
  • Clive Restoring (this part is used in any place wished for) <<<< What do you mean by this?
  • Is it the title?
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Hi,

Here are a lot of edits and suggestions.

I visited Istanbul and the Tokapi once, years ago. It was wonderful.



Clive



Restoring (this part is used in any place wished for) <<<< What do you mean by this? Is it the title?



The Underground Cistern has been through various restorations up to the p

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