Correction for IELTS Writing task 1 (photo of the chart is attached)

The bar charts provide information about the destination of UK graduate and postgraduate students who finished college in 2008 but did not apply for a full-time job. As can be observed from the charts, the total number of graduates who did not work full-time was far higher than that of postgraduates. In addition, while further study is the most common option, voluntary work only attracted a small number of both graduates and postgraduates.

To begin with, further study was ranked first for both graduates and postgraduates, with the figures of 29665 and 2725, respectively. The number of graduates chose part-time work is far lower than further study (17375), which is more than those who could not find a job approximately 150 people. In contrast, part-time work was more popular to postgraduates with 2535 students, whereas slightly more than half of that were unemployed. Only 3500 graduates and 345 postgraduates were in favor of doing voluntary work, which secure a very small fraction.