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Mk_nepal Posted 19 years ago
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00Please would you correct message below. 02br
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00We would like to nominate <Name> for special achievement award for the following reasons:00 02br
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00<he> is always cool, dedicate and helpful officer whose English very fluent. We our section really benefited from his English knowledge.00 00When there is difficult word, when there is long sentences and when there is important message or when we do not understand the full meaning of sentences.00 00We used to knock his knowledge door for correct and accurate meaning.00 00He always explains with real meaning of the words and sentences. 02br
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00<he> never keep this expertise with him.00 00He always tries to share this knowledge with other colleagues.00 00We love this behaviours.00 00We remember that, in September 2006 morning,00 00<he> came to the section and said “I have an idea in my mind, if you are agreed to implement”.00 00We were so serious! One of our colleagues asked him, please tell us what is about!. 00 00He replayed, “This is not a force to guys but if you implement this in your day to work, you will be more efficient & it would be a good for your future career”.00 00We promised that we will implement it.00 00Then he explains his proposal that “Lets speak 01b01u00only English02u02b00 within our section”, if any one speaks in Nepali he should be penalties by Nrs xx Rupees in each time. 00 00We agreed on his proposal and XYZ became our treasurer.00 00So far the collected amount has around NRs xx.02br
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00Since then we have been improving our English significantly. Improving our English language is enhancing our efficiency and effectiveness’ in our day to day work. We therefore nominate <Name> for his encouragement, guidance & method of learning English. 02br
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00It is entirely falls out his daily job responsibilities.00 00We would very much seek his assistant, encouragement, and guidance in future as well. 02br
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00In addition to make the section English zone, he also helped us many ways such as correcting draft minute, email, specking etc.02br
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0We would like to nominate <Name> for 01b 00a/the02b 00 special achievement award for the following reasons: 02br 02br 02br 02br 00<he> is 01b 00a02b 00 cool, dedica01b 00ted02b 00 and helpful officer whose English 01b 00is 02b 00very fluent. 01b 00We, our section, have02b 00 really benefited from his English 01b 00knowledge whenever02b 00 there is 01b 00a02b 00 difficult word, when there 01b 00are02b 00 long sentences and when there is 01b 00an02b 00 important message or when we do not understand the full meaning of sentences. 00We used to knock his knowledge door for correct and accurate meaning - this doesn't make sense00.

  • 0We would like to nominate <Name> for 01b 00a/the02b 00 special achievement award for the following reasons: 02br 02br 02br 02br 00<he> is 01b 00a02b 00 cool, dedica01b 00ted02b 00 and helpful officer whose English 01b 00is 02b 00very fluent.
  • 01b 00We, our section, have02b 00 really benefited from his English 01b 00knowledge whenever02b 00 there is 01b 00a02b 00 difficult word, when there 01b 00are02b 00 long sentences and when there is 01b 00an02b 00 important message or when we do not understand the full meaning of sentences.
  • 00We used to knock his knowledge door for correct and accurate meaning - this doesn't make sense00.
  • He always explains 01b 00the 02b 00real meaning of the words and sentences.
  • 02br 02br 02br 02br 00<he> never keep this expertise 01b 00to himself02b 00.
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