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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Correction a summary

Hi

I have to write a summary of any novel so I've done it, but I'm not sure about grammar. could u help me and tell if there is any grammatical mistakes .

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Oliver was born in a workhouse, his mother not known to anyone in the town. She died right after giving birth to him, and he was sent to the parochial orphanage, where he and the other orphans are treated terribly and fed very little. The other boys, unable to stand their hunger any longer. On the appointed day, after Oliver finished his first serving, he asked for more. Mr. Bumble, the beadle, and the board are outraged, and decided to get rid of Oliver. Oliver run away, and tried to find a job eventually he worked at house where they treated badly with him. He decided to leave this house and he walked towards London. When he was close, he felt tired, so he couldn't continue. At that time he met boy named Jack. The boy told him (you can come with me to a place where a gentleman will give you a place to sleep and food, for no rent). Oliver followed him, and the boy took him to an apartment where he met Fagin, the aforementioned gentleman,. He eventually learned that Fagin's boys are all thieves. One day Oliver went with his friend to bookstore to learn how can they steal, they stole and run away, but Oliver didn't move, so people thought he was a thief. They took him to the court. The bookseller came just in time to the court and said that he saw that Oliver did not do it. The man who has been stolen asked Oliver to go with him to his home, Oliver was very happy with that, but Fagin and his group are not happy to have lost Oliver.
Brown send Oliver to return some books to the bookseller for him, one member of the group spots Oliver, and took him back to Fagin. Oliver was forced to go on a house-breaking excursion with the intimidating Bill Sikes.
At gunpoint Oliver entered the house, with the plan to wake those within, but before he could, he was shot by one of the servants. Sikes and his partner escape, leaving Oliver in a ditch. Oliver slowly recovers, and was extremely happy and grateful to be with such kind and generous people. Oliver, Mr. Brown, and the Maylies end up living in peace and comfort in a small village in the English countryside.
  
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