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0Almost everyone is talking about global warming and how it affects our daily life these days. Due to public pressure, nation leaders have been holding talks in hopes that they could come up with global solutions. One huge success is the Kyoto Protocol which requires all participating countries to follow its standards on carbon and other greenhouse gas emissions. However, some major greenhouse gas emitting countries like the US haven't ratified the protocol. I find it surprising that the US has not approved the treaty given its environmental conscious citizens. To its fairness, the country is largely powered by coal and breaking the heavy dependence won't happen overnight. 02br02br00Please correct any mistakes.Note that the facts may not be accurate so please ignore them and focus on the language. I'd be happy to learn about the right facts but please do it as a side note.02br02br00Thanks0-

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

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00Note that the facts may not be accurate so please ignore them and focus on the language. I'd be happy to learn about the right facts but please do it as a side note.12blockquote

10Too many conditions for me to deal with here.0-

New2grammar · Answer

0I'm sorry. I just didn't want the facts to get in the way and create an argument or debate over the accuracy. 02br
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00Well, if you don't feel comfortable with my facts, change anything you want. Any change will be appreciated. Thanks0-

Creativeguru · Answer

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00Almost everyone nowadays is talking about the global warming and its affect on our planet. Due to the urgency of the attention it needs, the leaders around the world are holding talks in the hope that they could come up with the solutions for it. One of the 00 00great successes in the recent times is the00 00 protocol, which requires all of its member countries to follow its guidelines to contain carbon and other greenhouse gas emissions. However, some major greenhouse gas emission countries like the 010200 haven’t ratified the protocol, it is surprising that the 00environmental conscious citizens’ country haven’t approved it. 02br
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00Hope it helps02br
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Mister Micawber · Answer

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01b01i00Not so good, CG. 02i02b01blockquote

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10Almost everyone nowadays is talking about 11del~~10the12del~~10 global warming and its 11del~~10affect12del~~10 11b10effects12b10 on our planet. 11del~~10Due to12del~~10 11b10Because of12b10 the urgency 11del~~10of the attention it needs12del~~10, 11del~~10the12del~~10 leaders around the world are holding talks in the hope that they 11del~~10could12del~~10 11b10can12b10 come up with 11del~~10the12del~~10 solutions11del~~10 for it12del~~10. One 11del~~10of the12del~~10 10great 11b10recent12b10 success11del~~10es12del~~10 11del~~10in the recent times12del~~10 11del~~10is12del~~10 11b10has been12b10 the10 10Kyoto protocol, which requires all of its member countries to follow its guidelines to contain carbon and other greenhouse gas emissions. However, some major greenhouse gas 11del~~10emission12del~~11b10 emitting12b10 countries like the US haven’t ratified the protocol11b10;12b10 it is surprising that the 11span11b10environmentally12b10 conscious 11del~~10citizens’ 12del~~11b10countries12b10 haven’t approved it.12span12br
11span11b11i11span10Yours needs work too, New212span12i12b10.12span12br
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New2grammar · Answer

0Almost everyone is talking about global warming and how it affects our daily life these days. 01del~~00Due to02del~~00 01font00Because of ?02font00 public pressure, nation01font00AL02font00 leaders have been holding talks in hopes that they 01font00CAN02font00 come up with global solutions. One huge success is the Kyoto Protocol which requires all participating countries to follow/01font00meet?02font00 its standards on carbon and other greenhouse gas emissions. However, some major greenhouse gas emitting countries like the US haven't ratified the protocol. I find it surprising that the US has not approved the treaty given its environmental conscious citizens. To its fairness, the country is largely powered by coal and breaking the heavy dependence won't happen overnight. 02br
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00 MM, Could you give me more clues?0-

Mister Micawber · Answer

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00Almost everyone is talking about global warming and how it affects our daily life these days. 01b00Because of 02b00public pressure, 01b00national02b00 leaders have been holding talks in hopes that they 01b00can02b00 come up with global solutions. One huge success 01b00has been02b00 the Kyoto Protocol01b00,02b00 which requires all participating countries to follow its standards on carbon and other greenhouse gas emissions. However, some major greenhouse gas emitting countries like the US haven't ratified the protocol. I find it surprising that the US has not approved the treaty01b00, 02b00given its 01b00environmentally02b00 conscious 01b00citizenry02b00. 01b00In 02b00fairness 01b00however02b00, the country is largely powered by coal01b00,02b00 and breaking01b00 that02b00 heavy dependence won't happen overnight.0-

New2grammar · Answer

0Thanks, MM. I have a question about because of vs due to. I'll create a new thread. Also, I need to think about 'has been' and 'citizenry'.0-

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