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0Almost everyone is talking about global warming and how it affects our daily life these days. Due to public pressure, nation leaders have been holding talks in hopes that they could come up with global solutions. One huge success is the Kyoto Protocol which requires all participating countries to follow its standards on carbon and other greenhouse gas emissions. However, some major greenhouse gas emitting countries like the US haven't ratified the protocol. I find it surprising that the US has not approved the treaty given its environmental conscious citizens. To its fairness, the country is largely powered by coal and breaking the heavy dependence won't happen overnight. 02br
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00Please correct any mistakes.Note that the facts may not be accurate so please ignore them and focus on the language. I'd be happy to learn about the right facts but please do it as a side note.02br
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01blockquote 00Note that the facts may not be accurate so please ignore them and focus on the language. 0-

  • 01blockquote 00Note that the facts may not be accurate so please ignore them and focus on the language.
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00Note that the facts may not be accurate so please ignore them and focus on the language. I'd be happy to learn about the right facts but please do it as a side note.12blockquote
10Too many conditions for me to deal with here.0-
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0I'm sorry. I just didn't want the facts to get in the way and create an argument or debate over the accuracy. 02br
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00Well, if you don't feel comfortable with my facts, change anything you want. Any change will be appreciated. Thanks0-
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00Almost everyone nowadays is talking about the global warming and its affect on our planet. Due to the urgency of the attention it needs, the leaders around the world are holding talks in the hope that they could come up with the solutions for it. One of the 00 00great successes in the recent times is the00 00 protocol, which requires all of
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01b01i00Not so good, CG. 02i02b01blockquote
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10Almost everyone nowadays is talking about 11del10the12del10 global warming and its 11del10affect12del10 11b10effects12b10 on our planet. 11
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0Almost everyone is talking about global warming and how it affects our daily life these days. 01del00Due to02del00 01font00Because of ?02font00 public pressure, nation01font00AL02font00 leaders have been holding talks in hopes that they 01font00CAN0
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00Almost everyone is talking about global warming and how it affects our daily life these days. 01b00Because of 02b00public pressure, 01b00national02b00 leaders have been holding talks in hopes that they 01b00can02b00 come up with global solutions. One huge success 01b00has been02b00 t
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0Thanks, MM. I have a question about because of vs due to. I'll create a new thread. Also, I need to think about 'has been' and 'citizenry'.0-

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