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0 Amy and I left for the mall at 7 to get James a birthday cake. It was his 35th birthday.At the bakery shop, we had a hard time choosing from a wide selection of cakes.When I agreed to pick up a cake, I thought it was a 20 minute job including the travel time, tops. 02 br
00 There were blueberry cake with chocolate truffle filling, vanilla iced; tiramisu with chocolate shavings;keylime torte dipped in truffle chocolate, just to name a few.After 20 minutes of dilemma, we bought the keylime torte because i loved keylime. One the way home, we got involved in a traffic accident. We weren't injured but the cake wasn't that lucky. 02 br
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00 There were blueberry cake with chocolate truffle filling, vanilla iced; tiramisu with chocolate shavings;keylime torte dipped in truffle chocolate, just to name a few.After 20 minutes of dilemma, we bought the keylime torte because i loved keylime. One the way home, we got involved in a traffic accident. We weren't injured but the cake wasn't that lucky. 02 br
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00 Are there any mistakes? 02 br
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02 br 01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas. Leave a space after all sentence punctuation: 02 br 02 i 02 br 00 Amy and I left for the mall at 7 to get James a birthday cake. It was his 35th birthday.
- 02 br 01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas.
- Leave a space after all sentence punctuation: 02 br 02 i 02 br 00 Amy and I left for the mall at 7 to get James a birthday cake.
- It was his 35th birthday.
- At the bakery shop, we had a hard time choosing from a wide selection of cakes.
- 02 br 02 br 00 There 01 u 00 were 02 u 00 blueberry cake with chocolate truffle filling, vanilla iced 01 u 00 ; 02 u 00 tiramisu with chocolate 01 u 00 shavings; keylime 02 u 00 torte dipped in truffle chocolate, just to name a few.
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01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas. Leave a space after all sentence punctuation: 02 br
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00 Amy and I left for the mall at 7 to get James a birthday cake. It was his 35th birthday. At the bakery shop, we had a hard time choosing from a wide selection of cakes. When I agreed to pick up a cake, 01 u 00 I thought 02 u
01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas. Leave a space after all sentence punctuation: 02 br
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00 Amy and I left for the mall at 7 to get James a birthday cake. It was his 35th birthday. At the bakery shop, we had a hard time choosing from a wide selection of cakes. When I agreed to pick up a cake, 01 u 00 I thought 02 u
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0 Amy and I left for the mall at 7 to get James a birthday cake. It was his 35th birthday. At the bakery shop, we had a hard time choosing from a wide selection of cakes. When I agreed to pick up a cake, 00 I had thought 00 it was a 00 20 minute (Is it missing an S?I was told not to use the plural when it functions as an adjective, a five minute break) 00 job including the travel
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