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0Amy and I left for the mall at 7 to get James a birthday cake. It was his 35th birthday.At the bakery shop, we had a hard time choosing from a wide selection of cakes.When I agreed to pick up a cake, I thought it was a 20 minute job including the travel time, tops.02br
00There were blueberry cake with chocolate truffle filling, vanilla iced; tiramisu with chocolate shavings;keylime torte dipped in truffle chocolate, just to name a few.After 20 minutes of dilemma, we bought the keylime torte because i loved keylime. One the way home, we got involved in a traffic accident. We weren't injured but the cake wasn't that lucky. 02br
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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas. Leave a space after all sentence punctuation:02br 02i 02br 00Amy and I left for the mall at 7 to get James a birthday cake. It was his 35th birthday.

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Leave a space after all sentence punctuation:02br 02i 02br 00Amy and I left for the mall at 7 to get James a birthday cake.
  • It was his 35th birthday.
  • At the bakery shop, we had a hard time choosing from a wide selection of cakes.
  • 02br 02br 00There 01u 00were02u 00 blueberry cake with chocolate truffle filling, vanilla iced01u 00;02u 00 tiramisu with chocolate 01u 00shavings; keylime02u 00 torte dipped in truffle chocolate, just to name a few.
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0Amy and I left for the mall at 7 to get James a birthday cake. It was his 35th birthday. At the bakery shop, we had a hard time choosing from a wide selection of cakes. When I agreed to pick up a cake, 00I had thought00 it was a 0020 minute (Is it missing an S?I was told not to use the plural when it functions as an adjective, a five minute break) 00 job including the travel

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