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Jaleh Posted 7 years ago
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My Ph.D. thesis will be on "Timing and beat perception in cochlear implant (CI) users" which mostly aims at filling the gap in the science that how beat perception occurs in CI recipients.

I became more and more interested to make a merger between music and psychology.

  

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I suggest this. D. thesis will be on "Timing and beat perception in cochlear implant (CI) users".

  • I suggest this.
  • D.
  • thesis will be on "Timing and beat perception in cochlear implant (CI) users".
  • It mostly aims at filling the gap in the science of how beat perception occurs in CI recipients .
  • I am becoming more and more interested in how to merge music and psychology.
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I suggest this.

My Ph.D. thesis will be on "Timing and beat perception in cochlear implant (CI) users". It mostly aims at filling the gap in the science of how beat perception occurs in CI recipients.

I am becoming more and more interested in how to merge music and psychology.

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