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Jaleh Posted 8 years ago
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Excessive amounts of using computers and sitting without activity can present some physical and social hazards for children, so parents must keep a much firmer hand on using computers, smart phones and other pieces of technology.
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The sentence is grammatically correct and easy to understand, but it is not very well written. It is wordy and could have a better vocabulary.
- The sentence is grammatically correct and easy to understand, but it is not very well written.
- It is wordy and could have a better vocabulary.
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The sentence is grammatically correct and easy to understand, but it is not very well written. It is wordy and could have a better vocabulary.
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