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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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I wanted to know if the following sentence is correct or needs some improvement
While showing an old picture to someone- "How I miss this day! A day spent sitting at a coffee shop, having coffee,reading, listening to music and observing people."
I wanted to know if the following sentence is correct or needs some improvement
While showing an old picture to someone- "How I miss this day! A day spent sitting at a coffee shop, having coffee,reading, listening to music and observing people."
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How I miss that day, a day spent in a coffee shop reading, listening to music, and observing people!
- How I miss that day, a day spent in a coffee shop reading, listening to music, and observing people!
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How I miss that day, a day spent in a coffee shop reading, listening to music, and observing people!
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Could you please explain to me why it should be 'that day' instead of 'this day'?
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That is my native reaction: you are gazing into the past. However, why a day in a coffee shop could be so special is beyond me. Have you never been in another one, reading and looking at people?
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Actually that was a pretty special day. I was much happier, much relaxed as compared to these days.
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