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Jumanah Posted 10 years ago
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Dear: Gobal
I hope you still remember that the day on which I went to the airport, I called in order to check up on the house in order to be not responsible for what would happen after my friend came with his family. Then the new responsible is now in front of you and he's my friend. I hope you contact with him and he's still in Canada.
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I hope you still remember that the day on which I went to the airport, I called in order to check up on the house in order to be not responsible for what would happen after my friend came with his family. Then the new responsible is now in front of you and he's my friend. I hope you contact with him and he's still in Canada.
Can you please check this message ?
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Jumanahthe new responsible is now in front of you and he's my friend. I hope you contact with him and he's still in Canada.You need to change this. The underlined passages are contradictory. He can't be "in front of you" and "in Canada" at the same time, can he?
"new responsible" doesn't make sense. There's no such person as a respon
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