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Physician Ashraf Posted 11 years ago
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Females are more patient, which enables them to do better in jobs that serve others, thereby encouraging them to enter a profession.

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Females are more patient, which enables them to do a better job serving others and encouraging them to enter a profession . The logic is a bit faulty, as I don't see that patience encourages anyone.

  • Females are more patient, which enables them to do a better job serving others and encouraging them to enter a profession .
  • The logic is a bit faulty, as I don't see that patience encourages anyone.
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Females are more patient, which enables them to do a better job serving others and encouraging them to enter a profession.

The logic is a bit faulty, as I don't see that patience encourages anyone.

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