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I study Ergotherapy at university now. I want to apply to a programme which will take place in abroad. This is the first time I have ever filled in an application form. Because I am not very good at writing in English, could you help me with my sentences, please?
Explain briefly why you want to do your internship abroad and how this experience would contribute to your career objectives.
Occupational therapy (ergoterapy) is a new branch in my country. Occupational therapy was developed in Europe. I want to improve myself in occupational therapy. I want my country to be the best occupational therapist. So I need to do an internship. I want to do innovations in European countries. I have a project on the role of occupational therapy in Oncology. I want to implement my project in Europe with my own approach combining the approaches in Europe.
I'm delighted to get to know and see other places. I want to meet people from other cultures. I will get a nice friendship. This way I will have the opportunity to develop my English as well as promote my culture.
I study Ergotherapy at university now. I want to apply to a programme which will take place in abroad. This is the first time I have ever filled in an application form. Because I am not very good at writing in English, could you help me with my sentences, please?
Explain briefly why you want to do your internship abroad and how this experience would contribute to your career objectives.
Occupational therapy (ergoterapy) is a new branch in my country. Occupational therapy was developed in Europe. I want to improve myself in occupational therapy. I want my country to be the best occupational therapist. So I need to do an internship. I want to do innovations in European countries. I have a project on the role of occupational therapy in Oncology. I want to implement my project in Europe with my own approach combining the approaches in Europe.
I'm delighted to get to know and see other places. I want to meet people from other cultures. I will get a nice friendship. This way I will have the opportunity to develop my English as well as promote my culture.
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Occupational therapy (ergotherapy) is a new field in my country. I want to improve myself in occupational therapy; in fact, I want to be the best occupational therapist in my country. However, I want to do my internship in Europe because occupational therapy is highly developed there.
- Occupational therapy (ergotherapy) is a new field in my country.
- I want to improve myself in occupational therapy; in fact, I want to be the best occupational therapist in my country.
- However, I want to do my internship in Europe because occupational therapy is highly developed there.
- I am currently planning a project on the role of occupational therapy in oncology, and I would like to implement my project with my own approach combined with European approaches.
- I am very interested in getting to see and learn about other places, and I want to meet and befriend people from other cultures.
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Occupational therapy (ergotherapy) is a new field in my country. I want to improve myself in occupational therapy; in fact, I want to be the best occupational therapist in my country. However, I want to do my internship in Europe because occupational therapy is highly developed there. I am currently planning a project on the role of occupational therapy in oncology, and I would like to impleme
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